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Enveloped by your torrential downpour
I burden myself with jaded memories

Enlightened by the imminent truth
I bask in your empty promises

Ensnared by your bitter tirades
I betray the graces of angels

Enthralled by your falsities
I banish words left unspoken
©2008 *delusionzOFgrandeur
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Somewhat personal. Somewhat nonsensical.

Mostly emotional, lol.

ENJOY!

Written April 16, 2008.

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~SasorisRedKitsune:iconSasorisRedKitsune: Apr 30, 2008, 7:11:57 AM
haha, yeah. I don't get it but it is very emotional. I like how you used the four 'e' words :D

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A painless lesson is one without meaning. One who does not sacrifice anything cannot achieve anything.

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"You can call her name a thousand times, and she will always be there.
You can love her with all your heart, but she is never going to care."
*delusionzOFgrandeur:icondelusionzOFgrandeur: May 1, 2008, 3:45:50 PM
:D I guess it wasn't supposed to make sense, now that I think about it!

Thank you! :heart: I love subtle similaries like that.
Did you notice the other trick?
"I burden"
"I bask"
"I betray"
"I banish"

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I'm so adjective, I verb nouns.
~SasorisRedKitsune:iconSasorisRedKitsune: May 2, 2008, 7:41:05 AM
kahahah, yeah, that can happen. :D

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A painless lesson is one without meaning. One who does not sacrifice anything cannot achieve anything.

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"You can call her name a thousand times, and she will always be there.
You can love her with all your heart, but she is never going to care."
~unconscious54:iconunconscious54: 5 days 21 minutes ago
Whoa.. deep. I never got the chance to read these, so now I am! Awesome work. :D

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I'm just a dead man
Lyin' on the carpet
Can't find a heartbeat
Make me breathe.
--- Dead Man, Jars of Clay
*delusionzOFgrandeur:icondelusionzOFgrandeur: 5 days 11 minutes ago
:boogie: I like going deep, even if some people can't follow me there. I'm so glad you approve! :glomp:

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I'm so adjective, I verb nouns.
~unconscious54:iconunconscious54: 5 days 11 minutes ago
Whoo! :D

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I'm just a dead man
Lyin' on the carpet
Can't find a heartbeat
Make me breathe.
--- Dead Man, Jars of Clay
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