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i m p l i c a t i o n s by *delusionzOFgrandeur:icondelusionzOFgrandeur:

Categories Literature > Poetry > General Poetry > Fixed


Your ambience has a surging
caustic tendency

Its dynamic nature forcing
fatalistic flaws

Translucent voices reveal your
martyred innocence

Without tainting the remnants of
our forgotten dawn
©2008 *delusionzOFgrandeur
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Its' brief, but I appreciate its insight and emotional severity.

The word choice is nice... can you tell I agonized over that? lol.

Written April 11, 2008.

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~SasorisRedKitsune:iconSasorisRedKitsune: May 1, 2008, 6:03:27 AM
Wow, this is really interesting. I love your choice of words and the simplicity, yet complexity. :D

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A painless lesson is one without meaning. One who does not sacrifice anything cannot achieve anything.

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"You can call her name a thousand times, and she will always be there.
You can love her with all your heart, but she is never going to care."
*delusionzOFgrandeur:icondelusionzOFgrandeur: May 1, 2008, 3:34:57 PM
:aww: Thank you! I do enjoy being simple and complex at the same time, lol.

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I'm so adjective, I verb nouns.
~SasorisRedKitsune:iconSasorisRedKitsune: May 2, 2008, 7:41:45 AM
lol :D I understand. :dance:

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A painless lesson is one without meaning. One who does not sacrifice anything cannot achieve anything.

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"You can call her name a thousand times, and she will always be there.
You can love her with all your heart, but she is never going to care."
~unconscious54:iconunconscious54: 5 days 20 minutes ago
You know, it would help if I knew what most of those adjectives meant. xD

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I'm just a dead man
Lyin' on the carpet
Can't find a heartbeat
Make me breathe.
--- Dead Man, Jars of Clay
*delusionzOFgrandeur:icondelusionzOFgrandeur: 5 days 13 minutes ago
:giggle: The only reason I know those words is from two agonizing years of Honors English.

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I'm so adjective, I verb nouns.
~unconscious54:iconunconscious54: 5 days 12 minutes ago
I wouldn't doubt it!

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I'm just a dead man
Lyin' on the carpet
Can't find a heartbeat
Make me breathe.
--- Dead Man, Jars of Clay
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